Saturday, February 5, 2011

Thesis Statement

My thesis statement for my paper is going to tentatively look like this:

"Think Globally, Eat Locally" is an effective argument to convince the human race to minimize their human activity because it uses, logical, easy, and effective ways to create an way we can make a difference as individuals.

Still needs some revising but I think I am on to something!

3 comments:

  1. I like this issue. Your points need to be a lot more specific though.

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  2. I agree with Taylor! I think your paper will be very interesting, but your thesis should be developed to be a lot more specific to your article.

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  3. Thanks Taylor and Nick I am changing my argument around a little bit after reading your posts. I think I am going to take the opposite view and say how it is an ineffective article! Thanks for the input guys!

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